I'm Back (redone - lineart)

So last night I stumbled on this old pic misskisa.deviantart.com/art/I-… and suddenly I had a flash of inspiration and so I started sketching. Of course, I finished the sketch at nearly 2 AM -- that's what happens when you start drawing at night, but then again I just HAD to get this out. I outlined the sketch just now.

The focus is on their expression, as opposed to the whole pose in my older pic. Tell me what you think.