Mysteries and Secret Desires--Cover

Well I already ready wrote a comment on your artwork before, but I guess a simple critique wouldn't hurt...

Anyway your picture looks really dramatic in showing different pics of Gohan, in his sayinman uniform, his normal attire and in his super sayin form, along with the kissing scene in the middle of the picture which takes up most the frame. All these features make your drawing look like a movie poster or in your case a cover of a romantic novel, that really grabs the readers attention.

As for criticizing it, not much to add expect to expect, try to improve it a bit, like say coloring it or at lest smooth out the lines a bit, after all I can see this fan fic cover of yours much more grander then it is now, thou that's just my opinion